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I got this from a reader who wants to participate in Jarushub’s CV clinic platform. Ignore the alignments. The original copy (attached in PDF) is better aligned.

unuigbe kingsley -current resume_updated

Unuigbe Katra Ejalonibu
No, 2 UIDC road off Refinery Road Effurun, Delta State Nigeria
Phone: 070382146**, Email: ****@gmail.com

SUMMARY:
 Excellent Materials management skills, efficiently utilizing available resources to bring about desired outcome, and reducing down time
 Capable of describing and implementing basic troubleshooting techniques of computers
 Excellent with using various Engineering tools (both electrical and mechanical) for measurements, calibration, repair, maintenance and troubleshooting.
 Hands on training on Engine repairs, electronic management / fault diagonistic equipments
 Extensive experience as an IT support technician, (Windows xp/vista/7, LAN and wireless networks installation, network & data security and repairs, Hardware; desktops/laptops/handhelds/mobile devices, )
 Excellent Microsoft office suite skills, can also provide support or training.
 Basic knowledge of SAP ERP system (Production planning (PP), project system (PS) & Materials management. (MM) modules.
 Excellent with AutoCAD software for (drafting & modelling, pipe design & P&ID)
 Average knowledge of AVEVA PDMS® (Plant Design & Management System).

EXPERIENCE
Lead Instructor Nov. 2011 – Oct 2012
Divine Touch Computer Institute (NYSC)
Abeokuta, Ogun state, Nigeria
Responsibilities
 Trained students on the effective use of Microsoft office suite in Data analysis and presentation.
 Increased students base by 70% by developing a student referral compensation system.
 Ensured customers satisfaction by, providing expert & cost effective solutions.(repair, maintenance, Installation,and troubleshooting of faulty Desktops, Laptops and Handheld devices).
 Introduced new courses (AUTOCAD & BASIC COMPUTER ENGINEERING) prepared course objectives and outlines for new courses.

Maintenance Engineer (Trainee) July 2011 – November 2011
S.G JONES Engineering Nig. Ltd.
Warri, Delta State, Nigeria

Jobs undertaken include
 Repaired or replace defective equipment parts using hand tools and power tools, and reassemble equipment.
 Learned testing, & fault diagonostic techniques.
 Maintenance of Pumps, and hydraulic systems in swamp bogeys, excavators, cranes & forklifts)
 Inspected, operate, and test machinery and equipment in order to diagnose machine malfunctions.
 Safe materials and tools handling, and general safety of persons and equipment
 Cleaned and lubricated shafts, bearings, gears, and other parts of (CAT, DEUTZ, CUMMINS, & PERKINS, heavy duty engines.)
 Drafting of diagrams of engine cooling & fuel systems using AUTOCAD

Systems Engineer (contract) January 2011 – June 2011
Royal Energy Support Systems (IT contractor to Shell Edjeba Estate School)
Warri, Delta State, Nigeria

Responsibilities / Achievements
 Providing IT support for Shell Edjeba Estate school systems and networks, with a staff strength of 84.
 Created Excel spreadsheet program for auto generation of qualified admission candidates / Developed Ledger for organisation’s coopoeretive society, with MS Excel.
 Designed and managed computer Lab and office network
 Part of maintenance team, providing data backups/ recovery, virus protection, and network security
 Lead, IT helpdesk/technician; providing IT support via phone or onsite troubleshooting. First responder to emergency issues, worked unsupervised, guaranteeing customers satisfaction, in a cost effective manner.

Marine Engineer (Internship) April 2007 – October 2007
Lamnalco Nigeria Limited ( marine and offshore services)
Port Harcourt, Rivers State, Nigeria
Responsibilities
 Independent watch-keeping of the engine room when the Main Engines are under operation simultaneously with all the other auxiliary machinery such as Generators, pumps, air compressors, Air conditioning plant and refrigeration plant, onboard the LAMNALCO BUFFALO, in the Mobil oil producing field. (offshore)
 Learnt Fire fighting techniques; evacuation techniques; personal health and safety.
 Inspected drives, motors, belts, fluid levels, filters, and perform other maintenance actions, following checklists..
 Responsible for engines in operation, checked pipes and flow lines to ensure they were in excellent conditions, and logged details appropriately.
 Worked overnight during loading and offloading of fuel oil from the vessel.
 Applied anti-corrosive paint to pumps, pipes, fittings, and valves to prevent corrosion.
 Correct usage of measurement, instrumentation and calibration equipments.

EDUCATION: Bachelors of Engineering in Mechanical Engineering (B.Eng) – May, 2011
Ambrose Alli University, Ekpoma

CERTIFICATIONS:
Pumps, Valves and Compressors, Repair & maintenance – – April 2013
Petroleum Training Institute, (PTI) Effurun.

Plant Design and Management System (PDMS) – March 2013
Logatech Engineering Services, Warri.

Certificate in AutoCAD drafting & Modelling – Nov. 2011
Certified by the Petroleum Training Institute, Effurun

Peer Educator Training course and project. – Nov. 2011
Certified by ARFH through the NYSC scheme.

Basic Safety Skills – May 2011
Certified By Safety Skills International

Project Management, Certification in View
PRINCE2®

LEADERSHIP ACTIVITIES
 Coordinator for volunteer Corp Peer Educator Trainers CPETs (NYSC, Abeokuta South L.G.A.) (2012)
 Vice President YAHSAC CDS group (NYSC, Abeokuta South L.G.A) (2012)
 Trained and mentored 40 students as Peer Educators. (P.E) as part of my volunteer obligations.
 Successfully organized Awareness campaign, to reach various schools within and around Abeokuta.
 Effectively coordinated several commitees towards achieving CDS Projects.
 Secretary Jets club Yonwunren college warri July 2000 – May 2001

REFERENCES Available upon request

 

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2 comments

  1. Jarus 26 April, 2013 at 19:32 Reply

    MISSES

    1, To answer your question on what would be the first thing that would cross my mind on seeing the CV, my answer is straight: the CV is unwieldy! If you spent almost a quarter of the entire space as summary, I wonder how long details are going to be – 10 pages?

    2, This is an entry level CV (he just finished NYSC last year), yet no personal details (date of birth in the minimum). This is a no-no.

    3, What did you graduate with? No mention of that. Well, I’m familiar with this style of excluding class of degree, but I candidly think it is ill-advised, even if I have seen a couple of people that excluded their class of degree because of low grade and claimed it worked for them. That is the most critical criteria for entry level job shortlisting for almost 100% of employers in Nigeria and I’m not sure anybody has time to be ring you up to ask for what you graduated with if your CV doesn’t speak for you

    4, Your CV is too essay-like. Learn to summarize and remove irrelevant things.

    HITS

    1, You appear okay in English language as spelling errors that dot almost 90% of Nigerian entry level CVs I have come across are almost non-existent here. At least I didn’t pick one, save your starting ‘Warri’ with lower case ‘w’. Warri, being a proper noun, must start with capital letter. Little things like these matter.

    2, You appear to be IT-savvy. It’s a good skill in today’s world. Try to wrap up those certifications and your chance appears bright.

    3, You have participated in team activities in leadership roles. That is a plus.

    All the best, brother.

  2. john 8 June, 2013 at 14:33 Reply

    This an entry level CV u don’t need summary u should use Objective instead and make sense not too much grammar

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