Free CV Review – Mrinmoy Ma.
The CV below (and PDF version attached) is from one of Jarushub’s readers from India. He asked for review. See my review in the comment button.
CURRICULUM VITAE
Mrinmoy Ma
E-mail : ***@gmail.com/mrinmoytechno@rediffmail.com
Address: 2/7/1 Vidyasagar Road, near Vidyasagar park
Phone : 98042448xx/ 91432689xx (kolkata)
Dum Dum Cantt. Kolkata-700065,
P.O: Rabindra nagar, North 24 parganas,
West Bengal, India
OBJECTIVE
To obtain and secure a challenging position in manufacturing operations and development of my core field or software which will utilize in-depth acquired knowledge and collective experience in a dynamic team oriented environment
BRIEF PROFILE
Industry : Food industries, Hotel (quality), retail (quality), hospital (medical coding, food quality), sales
Engineer (food sector), Food testing labs and Govt food sector, last but not least software
Industries and Marketing.
Highest Degree : B.Tech. (Food Technology)
City : Kolkata, West Bengal
HIGHLITES OF QUALIFICATION
• Self-motivated person with tireless enthusiasm and energy.
• Dedication and drive as hard working individual.
• Productive person who follows ideas and suggestions.
• Exceptional adaptability and versatility.
• Ability to manage multiple tasks in a pressured environment.
EDUCATIONAL QUALIFICATION
a) Degree : B.Tech in Food Technology from Techno India (WBUT) in 2010 with 72 %.
b) 12TH : passed with 59% in 2006 from DDBI (West Bengal board)
c) 10TH : passed with 71% in 2004 from DDBI (West Bengal board)
d) Certificate course : C, C#, Dot Net in 2013(ASP.Net with c#, c#. Net) web apps, windows apps
&console apps. From CMC LTD (pursuing).
WORK EXPERIENCE
1) Duration : 6 months (Feb ’11- July ’11)
Company : Bengal Beverages pvt ltd.
Designation : worked as a shift chemist.
Job Profile : BBPL is an authorized bottler of coca cola & my role was supervising the operation,
Water treatment, syrup manufacturing, paramix operating, lab oriented quality assurance,
Raw, finish product & packaging material checking, CO2 loading unloading and even
Participating in quality auditing etc.
Reason of leaving : I had a medical problem called cervical spondylities and too much pain at my back
Since January’11 and after that I left my job in july’11 due to my seekness and took medical treatment from July’11 to Aug’12. Now physically I am fit as per my view and doctor’s concerns & ready to join again to my professional life.
PROFESSIONAL TRAINING
1) Duration : 4 months (sept’10- Jan ’11)
Company : Mayurank Foods Pvt.Ltd.
Training overview : in this firm my training was conducted in quality checking & quality analysis of different type of
Dry fruit & nuts, spices, herbs and etc.
2) Duration : 1 month (2009)
Company : Bengal Beverages pvt ltd.
Training overview : in this bottling plant our training was conducted in all section like water treatment plant,
Sugar section that is raw syrup & ready syrup making, main production section means
Paramix machine, filler, caper and packaging section, knowledge in different type of valve,
Pumps, coding machines, packing machines, waste water treatment plant, microbiological
Section, electrical distribution lines, online pipes channels etc.
PROJECT
Project on online sterilization of fruit juice machine designing during 4 yr of Engineering. This project was a group work to design a sterilization machine of fruit juice in a pilot scale. We had to determine its capacity, pipe length and diameter, juice holding time, temperature, total number of tanks, heat measurement, boiler installation etc.
COMPUTER SKILLS
Applications : Web, Windows, Console Application (Dot Net Technology)
MS-Office Packages : MS-Word, Power-Point, Excel, Access, Paint, Outlook, Dos etc.
Language/Internet/other : C, C#, HTML, CSS, JavaScript, Jquery , Oracle Sql, PL Sql, Dreamweaver, Photoshop, Net surfing,
Dowloading, Form Filling, E-ticketing, Photoscape and knowledge on other software’s.
SKILLS
Down to Earth.
Positive Thinker.
Confident & Believe in Team Work.
Honesty, punctuality, loyalty, discipline and dedication towards the organization.
Motivating subordinates in achieving specific task.
Control in Planning, Organizing and execution of various related task.
Provide advice, assistance and follow up on company policies procedures and documentation.
VOLUNTEER EXPERINCE
Participating in a science fair demonstrating of a project in 12th standard showing what is Black hole of space science and used its necessary eqn’s.
Participating in a science fair demonstrating of a project in 10th standard showing how earth quack happens and how we can prevent this.
Taking membership in collage fest in collage life.
Participating in robotics competing in collage.
Participating various quiz contest, drawing competition, debates, computer gaming.
Last but not the least participating in tree planting, blood donation camp, event management etc.
PERSONAL DETAILS
Date of Birth : 30th July ,1988
Gender : Male
Marital Status : Single
Nationality : Indian
Languages Known : English, Bengali and Hindi.
Strength : Ambitious, Fast learning, Hardworking.
Hobbies : Interacting with people, Driving, Watching T.V. computing, social networking.
Address : 2/7/1 Vidyasagar road, near Vidyasagar Park, D.D.Cantt, kolkata- 700065. P.O: Rabindra Nagar, North 24 Parganas, West Bengal.
DECLARATION:
I hereby declare that the information provided above is authentic and not fabricated.
Yours Faithfully,
Mrinmoy Maitra
Dear Mrinmoy,
Your CV presents you as one serious minded young man, unfortunately challenged by health.
I also see reflecting some things which are peculiar to your society (India). For instance, declaration is not required in Nigerian society here. But Jarushub being a global platform, even if it has West Africa as its hub, I recognise the societal differences. Hence, your declaration is in order.
Your CV is okay and looks honest. I however spotted some grammatical errors, although I recognise that in India over there, people care less about English. Nonetheless, if a CV must be written in English, the least thing is to do so in proper English.
Let me point out some areas of grammatical errors:
Highlights, not highlites
Sickness, not seekness
Belief in team work, not believe in team work (in the context)
Participating in various quiz contest, not ‘participating various quiz contest’
Sept’10, not sept’10 (Name of month, like other proper nouns, must always start with capital letter)
Various related tasks, not various related task
Try to brush up the CV for the grammatical errors highlighted above. You may also share with someone that knows the language better to help spot more errors.
All the best.
Jarus
But sir please tell me how to hide this 2 year of gap? In India there are 98% companies who doesn’t allow a candidate with gap.So what to do now?? How can I get a job again in my core field? It’s a career destroying. Please help me.
It may be quite difficult to hide the gap. Will you consider removing the experience and redrafting the CV as an entry level ( with no experience) and apply for entry level jobs? At 25 you are still young anyway.